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jack/chloe: Preparations (#84 Found)

  • May. 1st, 2009 at 11:54 AM
Jack Redemption

 

Spoilers for Day7, especially ep 20 + possibly 21!!!!

"There's something wrong with you, isn't it?"  He instinctively turns around at the sound of her voice. She’s standing in the doorway, her arms crossed in front of her chest, looking so fragile and yet so strong. Her eyes move to the syringe when he pulls it out of his arm. “You're, you're not using again, are you?"
He closes his eyes for a second, taking a deep breath in a futile attempt to control the panic that rises in his chest. Hastily he rolls down his sleeve and gets up, searching her eyes.

"Come here." He takes her arm and settles her into the chair across from him.
"I don't know how to tell you this. It's…“ He looks down at his shaking hands and interlocks his fingers to mask it. He swallows, then looks up and meets her worried gaze.

“I've been exposed to some of the bio weapon." He’s astonished that his voice carries.
Her eyes widen in shock. "Oh. So you…so that's the medication?" She nods towards the little black case
He nods slowly, forcing himself to look at her when he continues: "It's, it masks the symptoms. There's no treatment for this."
"So, you're telling me you're dying?" The pain in her eyes is that intense that it hurts him.
He nods, unable to say anything, fighting the tears that well up behind his eyes.
"No" she whispers, "no!"
"I'm sorry, Chloe" his eyes drift to his hands again. They are shaking even worse now and he hides them under the table.
"But, I don't understand.” He can hear his panic in her voice. “I, you, you don't, you don't die."

Her eyes plead him to tell her she's right.

A hint of a sad smile appears on his face. "I'm afraid I do."
She shakes her head, tears falling from her eyes now. "No, I, there has t
o be..."
He stops her by reaching out and taking her hand. Softly he shakes his head. "No. There isn't."
Her lips start to tremble when she tries to hold back the tears and he ignores his trembling legs, pushes himself up into a standing position and walks over to her, pulling her into a hug.
"I'm so sorry, Jack" she cries into his shoulder.
He nods. "Yeah" he whispers.
She pulls back and looks at him.
"How long?"
"Probably hours, not days."
She flinches and swallows hard, biting her lip, her eyes never leaving his.
"I need you to know something" she says quietly before leaning closer and placing her lips onto his. Her kiss is soft, tender and startling in its familiarity and Jack feels himself respond in kind, tears falling from his eyes.
There are fesh tears in her eyes as well when they part.
He tenderly runs his thumb over her cheek, wiping away some of the moisture and she leans into his touch.

"I love you" he whispers.
She nods. "I know. I love you, too."
They smile at each other through their tears, for a moment unwilling to face the inevitable.
"I'm going to be there" she then says quietly, trailing her fingers over the side of his face.
His voice is hoarse when he says: "I was hoping you would. I can’t do this without you.”


Comments

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[info]monika5 wrote:
May. 1st, 2009 05:58 pm (UTC)
Aw. This is how it should be!

I loved it thanks for sharing :D
[info]noalinnea wrote:
May. 2nd, 2009 09:47 am (UTC)
Yeah, I wish it would be like that (except, minus Jack dying :( ) Thanks a lot for reading and commenting, that's what makes sharing fun1
[info]chloista4ever wrote:
May. 1st, 2009 06:37 pm (UTC)
Have i tell you how much i love your writing? i think i have, but i doesn't matter I'm going to say it again.

I love the way you write, such a intense and raw drabble!!! :-)
[info]noalinnea wrote:
May. 2nd, 2009 09:48 am (UTC)
*blushes* Thanks you so much! I'm so glad you liked it :)
[info]jr_jackgrl wrote:
May. 1st, 2009 09:05 pm (UTC)
Oh please tell me you somehow got a sneak peak of the next episode and are sharing it with us here!

This is perfect in every way.
[info]noalinnea wrote:
May. 2nd, 2009 09:49 am (UTC)
I'm afraid I haven't :( And I'd prefer it if Jack got away alive... Thanks a lot, I'm glad you liked it!
[info]juliealmeida wrote:
May. 2nd, 2009 07:01 pm (UTC)
I really hope that's what's going to happen well..minus Jack REALLY dying. Which we know won't really happen soon since he's back for an 8th season...anyways, again...Perfect!
[info]noalinnea wrote:
May. 3rd, 2009 09:22 am (UTC)
Thank you! Though I'm still freaked out about this whole prion thing. Maybe that's the med student talking, but how on earth are they going to fix this? Is he going to yell at the proteins to fold back into the right conformation, nice and smooth? Arrrrgh. But's almost Monday :)
[info]juliealmeida wrote:
May. 3rd, 2009 01:37 pm (UTC)
Haha. You are funny. Yelling at proteins. Hehe. :) Well, if he does, let's hope it will work. xD
[info]noalinnea wrote:
May. 3rd, 2009 01:41 pm (UTC)
Let's do indeed (because I can tell you, my own experience is- countless biochemistry lab courses- that proteins tend to give a damn about the fact that you are yelling at them... but maybe the voice will make the difference. Or Kim's stem cells?!)
[info]jr_jackgrl wrote:
May. 3rd, 2009 04:47 pm (UTC)
LOL you guys! I too am wondering how they can fix this in four episodes. But if anyone can yell at proteins to make them do what he wants, it's Jack.

"Dammit proteins! Just do it!"
[info]noalinnea wrote:
May. 3rd, 2009 08:47 pm (UTC)
:) "I need your full cooperation. Focus on the primary objective. On 3: 1-2-3-FOLD!!!"
Or his immune system simply tortures them back into the right conformation. I just don't understand why the proteins in the first place thought that misfolding was an option ;)
But well, if someone could use some memory loss it would be Jack. Might make him forget some of the past.
But I'm actually not sure if they want to fix this... maybe that's just it?
[info]jr_jackgrl wrote:
May. 4th, 2009 12:33 am (UTC)
Wow...good point. That would shake things up next season. But if that were to happen, let's hope that Chloe is the only person he remembers and he clings to her like cellophane. ;)
[info]noalinnea wrote:
May. 4th, 2009 06:04 pm (UTC)
*sighs* That would be awesome, then they could live happily ever after... ;) But actually the ending I'd prefer would be Jack shooting himself, not because of the stupid prion thing but because he can't deal with the insane sacrifices that constantly are being asked of him. Dark but imo better than random diseases :(
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